A big commotion,
Darkness explodes.
Fire grows,
Heated ignition.
Justice keeps leading me,
Nowhere or paradise.
Quiet readiness, searching.
Truth, under veils.
With x-rays;
Your Zen.
Slouching Mom gave a bit of a challenge and at first I thought there was no way I would even attempt it, but I thoroughly enjoyed myself. If you notice, each word begins with a consecutive letter of the alphabet. I like the restrictions mixed with the freedom of poetry, it was a wonderful balance. Give it a try! Be sure to let Slouching Mom know and she'll link you up!
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There is a great big KayTar update just below, if you go for that sort of thing and haven't seen it yet.
These shoes were made for walking
Who is this KayTar? And what is going on?
BubTar and KayTar
Healthy Child Campaign
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Because You Are Too Kind
23 comments:
Ohh, I love it. And "x-rays!" It made sense for you to use it!
X was tough, even tougher than Z, I thought.
You made that challenge look extremely easy! Love what you came up with!
lovely - especially with that beautiful new banner.
Love it, babe you did a great jon
um, or job..you know, whichever
Great poem indeed! :)
"nowhere or paradise"... I liked that line. Nice work!
Ooo you are a clever thing. I'll have to check it out.
best wishes
I enjoyed writing it and I'm loving reading all the others. What a wonderful creative exercise!
"Justice Keeps Leading Me."
Oh very cool! Poetry is so fun to experiment with!
i cold just SEE this all happening before my eyes. and in there i saw kaytar.
and hope.
lovely.
Beautiful! These are all so clever and compelling!
Good one! With all the scandals that appear seemingly daily, it makes me wonder whether the justice handed down will lead us to nowhere or to paradise. Here's hoping for paradise eventually.
Very beautiful poem!
oh, how fun, I might have to give that a try!
Really lovely.
Excellent!
Thanks for stopping by my post.
Hoping that your KayTar is well, soon. We did weight checks with our oldest daughter, every 2 weeks for 2 years. She is quite petite, (10 yrs. old, 52 lbs.) but healthy, now. She had no reserves to fight off illness when she was little, but she is amazingly resilient and finds strength in her that inspire us all. I hope that for KayTar.
Great post:)
I love this. Wow. Well done!
you rock
Wow - that is impressive! :)
Oh RATS! I got so into the KayTar update I forgot to comment HERE. BAH! LOL
This was awesome...really.
Julie
Using My Words
That was really good Kyla!!
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